All around

Category: Haikuย (senryu)

“They are all around,

Happy faces with sad eyes

Like yours, and mine too.”

ยฉsakshi~the escapist, 2017

Image: Courtesy ofย Pixabay

28 Comments Add yours

  1. Garry simpson says:

    Happy to have you back!! Missed ur posts around here..๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

    Liked by 4 people

    1. Thank you, Garry. This support means a lot.

      Like

  2. Jeni G.J says:

    Welcome back Sakshi. Wonderful haiku there.

    Liked by 4 people

    1. Thank you, Jeni dear. Couldn’t have done it without your support ๐Ÿ˜˜

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Jeni G.J says:

        You’re welcome sweetheart๐Ÿ˜˜

        Liked by 2 people

  3. sangbad says:

    After a time…good senryu this is…

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Thank you, Sangbad. As far as I know, you are proficient in haiku and I am still a newbie. So this compliment means a lot!

      Like

      1. sangbad says:

        Am a learner still…learning from all of you…

        Liked by 2 people

      2. We all are learners ๐Ÿ˜‡

        Liked by 1 person

      3. sangbad says:

        ๐Ÿ˜Š

        Liked by 1 person

  4. Mr. Mel says:

    A simple truthful poem, the eyes cannot lie.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Exactly… Eyes cannot lie. Thanks for your kind words, Mel. ๐Ÿ˜Š

      Liked by 1 person

  5. Lovely small and meaning full post

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Thanks a lot โœŒ๐Ÿ˜Š

      Like

  6. fictionspawn says:

    The eyes are the mirrors to the soul, they say…

    Liked by 4 people

    1. Yeah! They tell the truth. Thanks for reading! โœŒ๐Ÿ˜‡

      Like

  7. chaos-xd says:

    “Like yours, and mine too.โ€

    Your had me right there! ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ‘Œ

    Liked by 1 person

    1. We just hide the sorrow behind the mask of fake happiness. It becomes tiring sometimes. Glad you liked it honey.

      Liked by 1 person

      1. chaos-xd says:

        It sure does! Loved it!

        Liked by 1 person

      2. ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

        Liked by 1 person

  8. all the melancholy concentrated in just three lines. amazing truly amazing.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thank you SO much! I am glad you felt a connection to it. It means a lot. Thanks again! โœŒ๐Ÿ˜‡

      Liked by 1 person

  9. Orange says:

    Your write ups are super cool! Especially these haikus. I know I’m ‘like bombing’ but I can’t help ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ™ˆ

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Hahaha….thank you SO much, orange! You have no idea how happy this ‘like bombing’ is making me! I am glad you liked the haikus. Thanks again, dear! ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ž

      Like

      1. Orange says:

        Hehe… More likes will follow when I read ‘The price’ posts…will do it later today ๐Ÿ™‚

        Liked by 1 person

      2. No rush, dear! I still have to go to through your posts. Take your time! ๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡

        Liked by 1 person

      3. Orange says:

        ๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ’™

        Like

Leave a reply to fictionspawn Cancel reply